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12 Outstanding SNCO of the Year

Award Cat: SNCO
Winner: WING

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LEADERSHIP AND JOB PERFORMANCE IN PRIMARY DUTY:
- Exceptional SNCO! <BASE>'s nominee for the 2006 "Chief Master Sergeant Larry R. Daniels Award"
- Flawless superintendent control of flight's Operations/Readiness--84 firefighters, $10M fleet, $1.9M budget
- Mitigated 203 aircraft, 451 structural, 27 HAZMAT, 22 miscellaneous incidents and 215 preventive standbys
- 3.5K emergency response man-hours with 85% authorizations--achieved zero fire loss, no firefighter injuries
- Deployed as Fire Chief to Baghdad International Airport (BIAP); molded 45 firefighters into a cohesive team
  -- 24-hour combat fire protection--6K airlift missions carrying 57K troops/19K cargo short-tons--zero fire loss
- Battled Iraqi Special Forces Urban Assault facility fire--led 47 multinational firefighters--saved $4M complex
- Mitigated C-130 with reported battle damage/locked brakes--led three agencies--promptly reopened runway
- Secured 5 emergency water sources for BIAP--acquired pumps/equipment; enabled critical re-supply ops
- Responded to C-130 lightning strike--directed evacuation of 90 passengers--no injury/saved $48M AF asset
- Superior Command/Control during 11 IED incidents; led five agencies--safed all IEDs--no loss of life/injury
- Provided emergency response oversight for real-world BENT SPEAR incident--averted catastrophic disaster
- Incident Commander on class III fuel spill--quickly contained spill--minimized environmental/mission impact
- Established agreement w/ Iraqi fire chief--obtained 9K gallons of water; increased firefighting capability 90%
- Secured 27 Silver Flag training slots--corrected 5-year squadron deficiency; increased SORTS reporting 10%
- Managed 12 AEF teams/$2.75M of equipment--deployed 19 firefighters to four different venues--no shortfalls
- Corrected critical manpower shortfall--acquired 14 backfills--ensured 100% mission continuity/sustainment
  -- Acquired twelve qualified firefighters from the ### AFRES (local) unit--saved $21K in travel expenses
- Flawlessly managed fire protection programs for 7 multi-national camps/U.S. Embassy/U.S. civilians at BIAP
- Organized/led fire training for 6 Iraqi recruits--led 5 instructors/600+ man hrs--established Iraqi AF's 1st FD
- Motivated 61 firefighters in "Fit to Fight"--established aggressive flight training program--98% test pass rate
- Supervised 500+ tent inspections; corrected 422 discrepancies--enhanced life safety for over 700 personnel
- Revised four wing level emergency response plans--enhanced Barksdale's emergency response capability
- Led flight’s HQ ACC ’06 Nuclear Surety/Unit Compliance Inspections--earned four “Superior” performers
- Flawlessly directed 5 crews at dormitory fire--quickly isolated to roof/extinguished--limited damage to $100K
 

SIGNIFICANT SELF-IMPROVEMENT:
- Certified as Fire Inspector III--gained valuable insight/enhanced ## BW's Fire Prevention/Education programs
- Completed Silver Flag training--led 24-man fire team; greatly increased wing's war-fighting skills/readiness
- Diligently pursued off-duty education--earned 6 credits toward technical management degree--3.5 GPA
- Completed 36 hour First Aid/First Responder course--95% final grade--increased unit's response capabilities
- Trained in Theater Battle Management Core Systems--completed initial course--enhanced wings war readiness
 

BASE OR COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT:
- Involved--Top 3 member--led grocery bagging/retreat ceremony/dorm patrol; raised $500+ for organizations
- Stellar SNCO! ## MSG nominee for wing AFSO 21 POC/ handpicked by commander as ## CES Airshow POC
- Oversaw squadron enlisted quarterly/annual award/STEP program--garnered winners at the group/wing level
- President for ALS Disciplinary Review Board--provided detailed review/recommended appropriate action
- Polished communicator--emcee for firefighter Retirement Ceremony--squadron CC lauded as "outstanding"
- Unit financial specialist--assisted 5 Airmen developing financial/spending plans--reduced average debt 10%
- Directed Iraqi Civil Military Operations Center's medical assistance efforts--strengthened US/Iraqi relations
- Mentored/sponsored four-man Honor Guard team--provided leadership/guidance--flew 70+ US flags over Iraq
- Chaired Top-3 blanket fundraiser committee--led 21 SNCO's during design/sales--raised an astounding $4.8K
- Community leader--VFW Post #### nominee for 2006 "Gold Medal Award"--ready for SNCO of the Year

Note: 

Good package, the overall impact of the individuals deployment set it apart.  There were some numbering issues within the package, almost all are easy to ignore.  "ready" through me in the award package....


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