Letter Factory Memorandum Request Change of Reporting Date for PCS
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MEMORANDUM FOR CPD/CC
                                       42 MSS/DPMAR 
                                      HQ AFPC/DPAAD2
                                      IN TURN

FROM: TSgt LName, FName MI., FR 123-45-6789

SUBJECT: Request Change of Reporting Date for PCS

1. I request a change to my current reporting date to Robins AFB, GA. From 30 Jul 01 to 15 Sep 01. The original notification was sent from Randolph AFB to Maxwell’s MPF on June 11th, but due to personnel moves at the MPF and the MILMOD system being down, I was not notified until 20 June 01.

2. This short notice will cause a severe financial hardship. I purchased a home when I arrived here a year and a half ago and need time to clear it out and prepare to put it on the market, i.e.: repairs, painting, and contracting with a realtor. I cannot reasonably accomplish these things in under 60 days

3. The individual I am replacing at Robins AFB, GA is retiring 30 Nov 01 and this should allow adequate time to allow for a good change over.



                                                                                                          XXXXXXX X. XXXX, TSgt, USAF
                                                                                                          FR 123-45-6789


1st Ind, CPD/CC

TO: 42 MSS/DPMAR


I concur/nonconcur with this request.



                                                                                                                 XXXXX X.XXXXX, Col, USAF
                                                                                                                 Commander

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