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Letter of Recommendation
Officer Training School (OTS) Selection
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MEMORANDUM FOR OFFICER TRAINING SCHOOL SELECTION BOARD
FROM: 435 ABW/CC
SUBJECT: SSgt ?? – Letter of Recommendation
1. It is my pleasure to strongly recommend SSgt ?? for a commission in the USAF.
Pin Second Lieutenant bars on this star performer and send her back to Ramstein
to work in my wing!
2. SSgt ??’s list of accomplishments is highly impressive. She is a
Below-the-Zone promotee and multi-time winner of quarterly awards. Her
performance has been consistently rewarded at every duty assignment, from
Sheppard AFB technical training to Kunsan AB, ROK to Ramstein. Her enlisted
performance has been impeccable. She played a major role in WRM preparation for
OIF and OEF deployments, and even deployed to the Republic of Georgia 2003 for
MEDCEUR 2003. SSgt ?? led the medical equipment inspection team enabling a
150-bed expansion of Landstuhl Regional Medical Center for wounded OIF warriors.
The O-6 Team Chief lauded her leadership skills, prowess and tenacity performing
this critical wartime mission.
3. ?? is a rock solid NCO and involved citizen...she’ll make an even better
officer. She has consistently been involved in charitable causes, Base Honor
Guard and unit/wing events ranging from Madam Vice at an Enlisted Dining Out to
serving as the Squadron Guideon for a POTUS call. Her track record speaks for
itself. SSgt ?? is a fine American worthy of gold bars!
4. SSgt ?? has expressed interest in leading contracting and financial troops
into the future. Her background in medical logistics and business-focused
education naturally lean toward these career tracks. Select her for a commission
this board and then assign her top choice AFSC. I would be thrilled to have
Second Lieutenant Dismute play a leadership role under my wing.
CC Signature block
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Letter Added: 28 April 2006
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